In real life, we want answers
quickly. We Google them, demand explanations, and seek closure as soon as
possible. But in fiction, suspense thrives on patience — on the slow,
deliberate release of information that keeps readers turning pages long past
midnight.
Every reveal in Shattered Amish
Identity had to be carefully timed — from the first shocking moment Hannah
defends herself with combat skills she shouldn’t have, to the chilling
realization that her family’s lives hang in the balance. Each moment builds
upon the last, forming a chain of escalating tension that pulls the reader
deeper into the story.
I like to think of it as breadcrumb
storytelling. You give readers just enough to keep them moving forward, but
never the whole loaf. A scrap of memory here, a suspicious comment there, a
piece of evidence that doesn’t quite fit — all of it designed to nudge them
closer to the truth while leaving them hungry for more. The key is balance:
reveal too much too soon, and the suspense fizzles; hold back too long, and
readers grow frustrated.
The real magic happens when the
unraveling mirrors the character’s own journey. As Hannah struggles to piece
together her fractured past, the reader is right there beside her, questioning
what’s real, who can be trusted, and how far she’s willing to go to protect the
people she loves. By the time the final revelation hits, the truth doesn’t just
satisfy curiosity — it delivers an emotional punch because the reader has earned
it, step by painstaking step.
For a chance to win a copy of
Shattered Amish Identity, tell me;
If you were in Hannah’s shoes and
discovered everything you believed about yourself might be a lie, would you
keep digging for the truth — no matter the danger — or walk away to protect the
life you know?
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The key to her survival
lies hidden within her memories.
When Amish school teacher Hannah York is attacked, she
defends herself with skills she never knew she had. CIA agent Titus Miller
arrives, claiming that she’s actually fellow agent Lara Redmond—and that she’s
in danger from a powerful enemy. Despite suffering from amnesia, Hannah is
certain she’s only ever lived a quiet Amish life. But why does Titus seem so
familiar, and could it be true that he loved her once? When Hannah’s family is
abducted, she and Titus must work together to find them. Can Hannah trust him
to help unlock the truth of her past…and keep her safe?


I can't wait to read this, but don't enter me in the contest as I have it already. :-)
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Yes!
DeleteI would continue to find the truth.
ReplyDeleteEven though it would be hard, you'd want to know.
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Me, too.
DeleteI would have to keep digging, I need to know the truth. I've always been that way. ceedee1958@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteMe, too, Cyndi. No matter how bad, I want to know.
DeleteI would want to know the truth so I would keep digging. cherierj(at)yahoo(dot)com
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I would want to know the truth. jenningsask@verizon.net
ReplyDeleteI think human nature and curiosity would definitely have me looking for answers.
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i look forward to this book
ReplyDeleteFiction is so much better than real life. cheetahthecat1982ATgmailDOTcom
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ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading this book. I think I would need to find the truth but would want to keep my family safe at the same time. Hopefully, I would be able to do both. frazierhlhs@yahoo.com
ReplyDeleteI would continue to dig!!
ReplyDeleteI believe I would want to know who I am and have been.
ReplyDeleteI think I’d keep digging—this sounds great! Legallyblonde1961@yahoo.com
ReplyDeleteI would find out the truth since I was betrayed after 40 years.
ReplyDeleteI would keep digging. I deserve to know the truth. deborahdumm@yahoo.com
ReplyDeleteYour book sounds intriguing. I’d keep digging.
ReplyDeleteI'd keep digging!
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