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Wednesday, November 18, 2020

A Writer's Life

 by Patricia Bradley

A while back I decided to try my hand at writing a shorter romantic suspense novel for Love Inspired Suspense. So I put together a proposal after reading a couple of LIS books and sent it off to my agent. 

Then I read more LIS book and thought Uh, Oh ...can I catch that proposal before it hits a LIS editor's desk? Nope. It was too late. The chapters I emailed in the proposal did not start off with the hero and heroine in jeopardy. That's a must for a Love Inspired Suspense book.

*Sigh* At least the editor was amenable to me reworking the proposal since I realized my mistake. All this to say, if you're a writer and you're targeting a particular publishing house, be sure to read a LOT of their books. 

What I discovered was, the hero and heroine must meet in the first chapter and be in jeopardy. No cute meet here. They are immediately thrown into danger and the reader is left on tenterhooks as they escape.

And the jeopardy is always there, hanging over the couple. Once they're on their journey to capture the bad guys, they encounter them about every chapter, until the end where they overcome the villain(s). Oh, and while they're battling the villain, they are also falling in love, and battling that as well. The writer needs a good reason why they can't be together, but not such a good reason that they can't overcome it.

If you're like me and targeting Harlequin's Loved Inspired Suspense,  or you're looking for a great suspenseful story, look no further for good examples than the Suspense Sisters! Here are some perfect examples of what LIS is looking for:

A dangerous reunion they may not survive

In this Mount Shasta Secrets novel

FBI agent Tori Peterson intends to find her sister’s murderer, even if someone’s willing to kill her to keep the truth hidden. But that means returning home and working with the lead detective—her ex-boyfriend, Ryan Bradley. Though sparks still fly between them, Tori and Ryan must stay focused on catching a killer…before they are silenced for good.

You can buy it here.


An Amish woman targeted by a serial killer

is the only living witness…

As the sole woman to escape the Dead of Night Killer, Catherine Fisher’s the key to catching him—if he doesn’t kill her first. Now it’s up to FBI agent Sutter Brenneman to protect her. But with her memory missing and all clues indicating the serial killer took her for very personal reasons, it’ll take everything Sutter has to keep her safe.

You can buy it here.



From a dangerous reunion at sea…


To undercover as husband and wife.

Forced to jump ship during her investigation, undercover DEA agent Grace Young’s rescued from criminals and raging waters by her ex-husband, Coast Guard swimmer Dakota Young. Now to save the mission, Grace and Dakota must pose as a married couple to take down a drug ring. But will facing danger together reunite two broken hearts—or place targets on both of their backs?

You can buy it here.

I hope you've enjoyed my journey into publishing. I'll let you know if Love Inspired Suspense likes my new proposal. 

Leave a comment telling me if you've ever ventured into a new area and had to learn a new way of doing something, and I'll enter you in a drawing for a digital copy of one of the LIS books listed. Be sure to leave your contact information.

21 comments:

  1. I enjoyed learning how the Love Inspired Suspense books are constructed. As a teacher, I found that in every school and different school district where I taught over my long teaching career, I had to learn new ways of doing things. Each school had a different principal, who had her own requirements regarding lesson plan styles and dates due, faculty meetings, etc. Each district had its own choice of policies, textbooks for each grade level/subject, etc. The flavor of the parents and students at each school was unique as well. So, there were many, many variations to which I had to adapt over the course of my teaching career.

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    1. Absolutely, Susie-Q--there's always a learning curve with any new endeavor...especially when you're dealing with people.

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  2. I ventured into a new area when I joined the Women’s Army Corp. in the 70’s. fishingjanATaolDOTcom

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  3. A new area? hmmm... well, when I turned 65, I entered the "new area" of medicare (NOT pleasant experience) and I've learned new things in sewing & quilting, thanks to my sewing & quilting guilds... I've taken classes in embellished embroidery in the past 10 years--learned new stitches! I LOVE being a Nana to a 16, 13, 4, 2½, & 24 months old grandsons! Badawson16 at aol dot com

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    1. Aww, I bet you spoil those grandsons! I've done more since I turned 65 than I did in the years preceding it. :-)

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  4. Fingers crossed for you, Patricia. It would be an honor to have you part of the team.

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    1. I'm hoping. If I can just get this proposal back to my agent before the end of November! Thank you!!

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  5. not really
    bn100candg at hotmail dot com

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  6. This year has been a struggle for me. Auto accident caused me to be bedridden for 12 weeks. I had three surgeries, knee and partial femur replacement, plates and screws in my left arm and two screws in my cracked pelvis. Accident was 2/6, and I’m just now getting where I can walk unassisted. I had to relearn how to walk with a hinged knee. Quite different from my left knee replacement done several years ago.
    tumcsec(at)gmail(dot)com

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    1. You're still in my prayers, Gail! So proud of the way you've persevered!

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  7. Yes! I write and sell curriculum for teachers and had to learn how to use lots of new programs and how to create digital resources last spring. Stressful!

    Hope your proposal is chosen!

    amybradsher@gmail.com

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    1. Amy, I've written one abstinence curriculum and that was hard! And stressful when we were getting it approved by the state. My hat is off to you!!

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  8. enjoyed hearing about how the Heartsong books are did! I have ventured into new territory by starting to sew faces for teddy bears that a group I work with gives to local ER! sheliarha64@yahoo.com

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    1. Awesome, Shelia! I think those teddy bears are the most wonderful things for small children (and not so small) who end up in ER!

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  9. I've read many Love Inspired romantic suspense novels and never noticed that they are always in danger right at the beginning. Love these kind of stories and look forward to reading more. Glad you were able to change your story and shared it with us.

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    1. So glad you stopped by, Sheri! I'm hooked on the LIS books. :-)

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  10. Lol glad you got to regroup. Look forward to a LIS from you. These sound really good. Lol my sister just retired and moved here. When unpacking her books and I feel like I hit the lotto. She must have 100+ LIS books. I’m on cloud nine.

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