Tuesday, April 29, 2014



By Nancy Mehl

1.     What’s his name?

Although a rose by any other name might smell as sweet, the names you choose need to fit the character and the genre. Names should be chosen that not only fit the tone of your novel, they must also be appropriate to the setting. If your story takes place in Ireland, your characters might not be named Bubba, Nick, or Ephraim. Instead, they might be Pat, Conan, or Liam. Make sure you choose names that fit your character’s ethnicity, but don’t use stereotypes. Although Bubba is a fun name, not everyone who lives in Arkansas is named Bubba. Similarly, not all Jewish characters should be named Rebecca or Abraham nor are all Muslims named Mohammad. Pick names that are appropriate, just don’t turn your characters into stereotypes.

Combining names from different ethnic backgrounds can add interest to your story. For example, Sankari O’Brian combines an Indian name with an Irish name. What’s the story there? Sounds like an interesting family dynamic that will help to make your lead character’s background diverse and out of the ordinary.

Names can also help to paint a picture of your character in your readers’ minds. For example, who do you see when I mention Edward Prentice Howard, III? Or Buffy Vanderkellen? Do you see people from rich, aristocratic families? What about Billy Bob Hatfield or Betty Lou Clutterbuck? Would these characters most probably live a different kind of life than Edward and Buffy?

The names Rock and Brick aren’t popular now, but at one time, they put a picture into women’s heads of manly, masculine men. Today, the same image might be created by Lance, Duncan or Heath.

You also need to be careful with names like Gertrude, Maud, Mabel, Bertha, Frank, Norman or Otto. These names definitely bring up a picture of someone older. The same goes for Whitney, Tessa, Britney, Travis, Connor and Tyler. These names suggest someone younger. Make sure the names you pick not only fit your story, your genre, your setting, and your tone – but that they also match the age of your characters.

2.     What does he look like?

Your job as a writer is to create a picture in your readers’ minds so they can see your characters. This is especially important for your lead character and his or her romantic interest. The rule here is: Less is more. What do I mean by that?

Your readers have imagination. They will envision your characters in their own way. Don’t over describe them. Reveal just enough so that your character will create a spark in your reader’s mind that will bring your character to life. Sometimes, just a little description will paint a picture of someone the reader knows or has seen. Overloading them with details could strip away that image in their mind. You don’t want to do that. Once a reader has a clear picture of your character, they are real to them. They’ve made a connection. And that’s exactly what you want.

One important point: If your female lead character has a “turned up nose,” only bring it up once. Don’t stumble into the mistake some writers do and constantly remind readers that: Jenny stuck her turned-up nose in the air after you’ve introduced Jenny early on in your story with: Brice lightly kissed Jenny’s turned up nose and smiled. Overemphasizing any kind of description can be annoying.

3.     What does he wear?

Although we don’t choose our height, bone structure, hair, eye color, etc., we do choose our clothing. How we dress ourselves says a lot about us.

A man who wears jeans, t-shirts, boots and cowboy hats is telling everyone that he sees himself a certain way. A man who wears custom designed, expensive suits is stating something very different.

It works the same way with women. Designer clothing versus a thrown together, sloppy mode of dress sends a definite message about the attitude and priorities of the person who made these clothing choices. 

Decide who your character is and then dress him accordingly. Here are a few examples of characters defined by what they wear:

·        A female character with mismatched, stained clothes might not have much respect for herself. Or perhaps she has a substance abuse problem.
·        A man whose suit is threadbare and faded may care about his appearance (he put on a suit) but is probably down on his luck. He doesn’t have the money to buy a new suit.
·        Young people who dress in unusual clothes (Goth, pants hanging below the tops of their underwear, etc.,) are usually insecure and trying to find their identities.
·        A woman dressed to the nines but whose roots are showing and whose nails need attention may either be hurting financially or might be depressed. Maybe she doesn’t care enough to go to the hairdresser or get her nails done.

·        Of course, Amish and Mennonite characters have a form of dress that defines them, but what about a woman who isn’t Amish or Mennonite yet always wears long, plain dresses and keeps her hair in a bun? What does this tell you about her?
·        What about a man who has food stains on his shirt? Maybe his wife left him. Or perhaps he’s a detective who has to eat on the run. Sloppy in his dress but meticulous in his detection skills.
·        Are you character’s clothes wrinkled? What could this mean?
·        What colors do your characters like to wear? Do they like bright colors or do they only wear black, dark blue and brown? How do these choices define them?
·        When “dressing” your characters, don’t forget jewelry, shoes, socks, belts etc. Jewelry can say a lot about a person. Does your character wear a cross necklace or does a miniature silver skull dangle from her neck? What about a character who still wears a wedding ring years after his or her spouse died? Someone who wears four earrings in each ear is markedly different from the woman who only wears one small pearl in each lobe. On the TV show “Bones,” Seeley Booth wears loud socks and a belt buckle that reads “Cocky.” This certainly gives the viewer a clear picture of him, doesn’t it? Remember that sky-high heels, shoes with lifts, and scuffed shoes can tell a story as well. Describe in detail the way your character dresses on your character outline. (I’ll talk about these later.) You don’t have to use everything you write down, but it will be there in case you need it. Again, less is more.

One great way to learn about using clothing to define characters is to go to a shopping mall, sit down in the food court, and watch people for a while. How do they dress? How do they act? How do they use their clothing to express themselves? This exercise can be very eye-opening!

4.     What does he eat?

This is a very clever way to define your characters. Stephanie Plum eats Cheerios over her kitchen sink. Maybe your detective tells everyone he’s on a strict diet, but when he’s out of the precinct, he visits the hot dog vendor on the corner twice a day. Your characters can love French food in fancy restaurants or have a propensity for peanut butter and banana sandwiches. They can be self-professed vegans who sneak a hamburger when they think no one is looking. Or perhaps they’re fully committed to natural foods. Maybe they have odd phobias and can’t stand to have different foods touching while on their plate. They might eat one food at a time during a meal, never combining different foods together in their mouth. Maybe they only consume organic foods and believe it’s their mission in life to tell everyone else how to eat. What and how characters eat can tell readers a lot about them.

5.     How old is he?

You can describe a character without telling his age.

When he smiled his wrinkles seemed to grow their own wrinkles. His age-spotted hand trembled as he reached for me.

Not hard to see that this character is elderly. This is a great way to “show” age in your novel. However, there is one thing most editors want. They want to know exactly how old your main character is. They’re not interested in your descriptive prose as an indication of age. Especially in a series, editors will ask you to give your lead character’s age early in the story so your readers won’t wonder about it.

6.     What’s his job?

Your lead character needs a job. It must fit your story and your selected genre. A detective will probably work at either a police department or his own agency. An amateur detective needs an interesting occupation or hobby that puts him in contact with crime, criminals, or detection. However, he can have any profession if his love interest fulfills this objective. Having a relationship with someone who is in law enforcement works beautifully.

If your novel is literary, your lead character’s job may not seem quite as important to your plot, but actually, it can be. For example, if your lead character is bored with his life, I doubt he’ll be a fire fighter or in charge of the police department’s bomb squad! You’ll want to give him a job that will support his sense of boredom. Maybe he’s an actuary or an accountant. If you’re writing cozy mystery, you’ll want to your lead character to have a job or hobby that fits into the cozy mystery genre. Maybe your lead character makes quilts, cupcakes, is a librarian, owns a coffee house, a boutique, a bookstore, or a bakery. Or maybe she is a mortuary beautician. (Grin)

Many historical romances use governesses or housekeepers as their lead character. The lead character’s family has lost their money so they pack up their beautiful daughter and send her to work as a governess for the children of a handsome, brooding widower. Of course, sometimes the crazy wife is still alive and living in a special locked room!

No matter who your interesting lead character is, it’s important to pick a job that helps to define him – not detract from his personality or your genre.

7.     What does he want?

Every main character needs to begin his journey wanting something. It can be almost anything. (Maybe not a quest for his favorite candy bar though!) I suggest you pick a desire your readers will identify with. Finding love is probably the number one longing of people everywhere. In romance novels, this would certainly be the first thing a writer might choose. But how to add conflict? Giving him an inner demon that stands in the way of love can bring up exciting possibilities.  For example, if your lead character comes from a dysfunctional home or has been hurt by love in the past, getting his need fulfilled will be much tougher than it would be for someone who just “hasn’t met the right guy yet.” Uncovering his need and revealing the inner turmoil that stands in his way will allow you to develop a deep, rich character that can stir up empathy and compassion from your readers.

There are many other needs a character might have. Maybe he needs to be free from an abusive past. Or he needs to recover from the loss of a loved one. Perhaps he’s a veteran and is being haunted by his battlefield experiences. This idea also works for anyone in law enforcement or in the health field. Any occupation that faces your lead character with death, disaster or heartache can put a roadblock in his life that keeps him from reaching out for love. Maybe your lead character has had a breakdown because of his experiences and he is trying to assimilate into regular life.

Whatever you choose, remember that the reason most successful novels connect with readers is because the lead character sets out on a journey for something. Whether it is something you can see or something internal that can’t be seen, the quest is paramount in setting the tone of the novel. In almost every case, the lead character’s quest was twofold. Frodo set out to take the ring to Mordor, but he also had to face himself. Would the ring pull him to the dark side? Or was he strong enough to complete his mission? Don’t confuse this underlying need with your character’s main goal of solving “the problem” your plot will present to him. This inner need is different and will help to define your character. A lead character that is only concerned about solving your main plot predicament will only be a cardboard personality unless something interesting is churning beneath his fa├žade.

8.     Is he subject to change?

It’s vital that you ask yourself this question when creating your lead character. Is he going to change, or will he stay the same? Although some lead characters do remain steady after the trials and tribulations you put them through, it’s much more interesting if they change some. Something about your plot should bring a fundamental shift in their goals, personality or priorities.

In The Wizard of Oz, Dorothy’s main problem was getting home. However, by the time she did return to the farm, she had changed. She’d discovered that her heart’s desire didn’t exist “somewhere over the rainbow,” but that it was in her own backyard all the time.

When Frodo, Sam, Merry and Pippin returned from their adventures in Lord of the Rings they discovered that they’d changed. Their previous, carefree and irresponsible attitudes were gone. They’d seen and experienced things that had changed their priorities and their outlooks on life.

Luke Skywalker started out as a young boy who wanted adventure and ended up a Jedi knight. His experiences changed him in very definite ways.

Are you seeing a pattern here? Combining the need to solve your main plot problem combined with a personal quest will make your story deeper and your lead character someone your reader will find much more compelling.

9.     What makes him unique? What does he enjoy?

Your characters, especially your lead character, should have an interest or a quirk that sets him apart from the crowd. Not something so unusual that it doesn’t fit his personality or your genre, but a trait that makes your character memorable.

In my Curl Up and Dye series, Hilde loves SPAM and even enters the yearly SPAM contest at the state fair. Unless you’re writing cozy mystery, the unique trait you give your character doesn’t have to be quite this quirky. Giving a character a unique quality will help to make him memorable. It’s a really good way to define him without “telling” your readers what he’s like.

Let’s look at some other examples:

Maybe your hard-nosed detective lets off steam by:
·        Knitting
·        Running in marathons
·        Training dogs
·        Boxing
·        Bowling

You get the idea. Whatever you pick will show your reader just who your lead character is, and what makes him happy. If it’s bowling, your detective is probably down to earth. If it’s knitting, he’s probably pretty secure about his manhood. Of course, this could end up making him the butt of jokes at work. Could be a humorous idea and one that could really define your character.

10.   Who are the important people in his life?

This is self explanatory. Family, friends, coworkers? Anyone who is meaningful to him. Although secondary characters need to be carefully created, some of them may not be all that important to your lead character. Just who does he care about? Who does he listen to? Who does he go to for help? You can apply some of these same character questions to the people who play a large role in your lead character’s life – and in your story.

11.  What about his past?

Most human beings are shaped by their past. Your characters shouldn’t seem to just emerge from thin air. They need to have a life before they appear on your pages. Although you don’t need to get too detailed about this unless they happen to be your lead character or his main love interest, even your secondary characters should have some kind of past experience. Here are some questions to ask yourself and make note of when designing your characters:

·        Describe his childhood
·        How did his parents treat him? Did he have two parents or only one?
·        Did he get along with his siblings?
·        Was he a foster child?
·        Was he adopted? If the answer is yes, does he know it? (Revealing this in your story can add interest and conflict.)
·        Names of parents, grandparents, siblings and brief descriptions. *This is important (Note: If any of these relatives will play a strong role in your novel, be more detailed when listing them.)
·        Any trauma in his past?
·        Lost loves?
·        Was he popular in school? Unpopular? Invisible?
·        Any past issues with anger, alcohol, drugs? Did he smoke?
·        Was he brought up in a poor family? A rich one?
·        Does he resent his past or does he miss his simple, happy childhood?

As you can see, questions about the past can go on forever. These are just a few that can help you to shape your character. If you can think of others, add them!

12. What about his romantic relationships?

Is your lead character married? Divorced? Widowed? Looking? His reaction to his love life can show his state of mind in a very clear way. It can also help to explain his current reaction to the idea of falling in love if he tragically lost the love of his life, or if the person he loved ran off with someone else.

13. Does he have children?

Again, as with his marital status, his children or lack of children will help you to draw a clear picture of his emotional state, wants and needs. Maybe he wants children but doesn’t want to get married. Why? Maybe he has children but is estranged from them. Again…why? Men or women who have a poor relationship with their children have a story to tell. Tell it.

14. What is he afraid of?

Hilde Higgins had a fear of clowns and the color orange, but she had no idea why. It wasn’t until later in the story that she discovered what was behind her phobias. Although she had a photographic memory, she’d blocked the vision of her father taking off with “the other woman” in an orange convertible. And her fear of clowns came from her stint in the hospital as a child. She associates clowns with the entertainers who came to the children’s ward to amuse all the ill boys and girls.

Define your lead character’s fears and explain them. Anything’s possible, just be sure to tie it into your plot.

15. Where does he go to relax?

Where does he go when he wants to unwind? A park? Does he climb a mountain? Go to his favorite pub and shoot pool? Although some of these activities fit into the “what makes him unique” category, many times people go to a peaceful place when they’re under stress that doesn’t fit into the “unique” category. Where do you like to go when you feel like screaming? I like to walk around Watson Park with my dog. (And my husband!) Some women shop or get together for a night with their girlfriends. Men may get together to play poker. Your lead character should have a place to go where he can unwind and think clearly. Maybe he goes to the playground where he used to play as a child. Or he sits outside the house where he used to live with his wife or his parents.

16. What kind of people does he like?
What types of people is your lead character drawn to? Are his friends down
to earth? Do they enjoy the kinds of activities he does? Or are they different
from him? Maybe he likes quiet people who don’t challenge him. Or perhaps
he likes people who hold him accountable for his actions. 

What kind of people does your lead character dislike – even hate? Maybe he
hates phony people. Or maybe he has something against people who are
successful because he thinks he isn’t. You can do a lot with this. Maybe he
recoils from certain people but doesn’t know why. This is the kind of conflict
you can use to enhance your plot!

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Friday, April 25, 2014

Interview with Kristen Heitzmann and Book Giveaway

Join us in welcoming Kristen Heitzmann!

She's giving away a copy of The Breath of Dawn to one lucky winner. Please comment on the blog and leave your contact information to be entered in the drawing.

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Kristen Heitzmann is the bestselling author of two historical series as well as ten contemporary romantic and psychological suspense novels, including The Still of Night, nominated for the Colorado Book Award; The Tender Vine, a Christy Award finalist; and the Christy Award-winning Secrets.She lives in the Colorado Rocky Mountain foothills with her husband Jim and sundry family members and pets.

Now, let's hear from Kristen.

SS: How long have you been writing?
My first novel released in 1998, but I’d have to say I’ve always had stories in my head. It was only a matter of writing them down.

SS: Do you write full time? If the answer is no, what else do you do? If you are a full time author, what other jobs did you have in the past? 
My days (and nights) are a creative river in which I write or do other activities that contribute to the process. Family and friends jump in at will and I, at times, jump out. But even hiking the mountain trails is part of this river as cogitation. 

SS:  Why suspense? Do you write in any other genres? If so, what?
I write suspense because I create these great people and then stuff happens to them.
Some of my books are more family or relational drama, and I’m working on a Romantic Comedy for the sheer fun of it.

SS: How does your faith play into your writing?
I write from my belief system, so my characters tend to say stuff I believe and act in Christ-honoring ways.

SS: If you couldn’t write, what else would you want to do?
I think surgery would be cool and trial law.

SS:  Tell us about your current release.
The Breath of Dawn is a contemporary suspense. Quinn Reilly has lived off the grid since her testimony put a conman in jail. Now he's out, and looking for payback. Keeping to herself by necessity, Quinn can leave if she needs to. But, when she meets the Spencer family—particularly Morgan—she finds herself wanting to stay. 

Morgan Spencer, a successful business guru, has spent the last two years on autopilot. After the death of his wife, he moved to his brother's ranch with his infant daughter, his only goal . . . to keep breathing. When he meets Quinn, something triggers inside him. Realizing she has her own ghosts, he decides they can help each other out with a simple business proposition—a union that soon evolves into much more than business.

SS: Where did you get your inspiration for this book?
Hiking the mountain trail behind my house, I was listening to an old playlist that I had incorporated into a much earlier series. At once those characters were back in my head with Morgan Spencer pressing for more page time. The scene that came started the new story.

SS: What is the main thing you hope readers remember from your story?
There’s a strong theme of fatherhood—good and bad—that translates to a relationship with God as sons and daughters

SS: Who is your favorite character in this book and why?
I love Morgan, but Quinn Reilly was really fun to write. When she came on the scene I had no idea she would fit him so well. In spite of the struggle, their relationship is sweet, fierce, and vital, bringing out the best in each. She’s funny, quirky, and brave. Most of all she’s loyal even though few were ever loyal to her. Morgan finds her irresistible and, in typical Morgan fashion, takes things in hand.

SS: Who is your least favorite character in this book? Why?
I’d have to say Quinn’s sister Hannah. Hers was the biggest betrayal of all.

SS: What are you working on now?
I’m writing a wildfire novel called INDOMITABLE.  It’s set in my fictional town of Redford Colorado from INDIVISIBLE and INDELIBLE with returning characters like the police chief and townspeople. The new leads are Incident Commander Nash Crawford and, yeah, the girl’s a Hotshot. Nash and Eva Cruz have history and it’s incendiary.

SS: A tough question: Where do you want to be career-wise in five years? Ten years? 
I don’t actually plan my career. That part’s up to God.

SS:  Now let’s get a little personal. Name two things on your “bucket list” that you haven’t done yet.  
No bucket list really. I live each day as it comes.

SS: Where can readers find you on the internet?
Facebook: Author Kristen Heitzmann or Facebook: Kristen Heitzmann
Twitter: Kristen Heitzmann @ KFHeitzmann
Pinterest: Kristen Heitzmann

SS: Anything else you’d like to tell or share with us?
Only how grateful I am to the readers who enjoy my stories and spread the word. I love this thing God’s given me to do, and that support humbles and encourages me.

Thanks so much for joining us. Love your book and can't wait to read the next one!

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